we had to write an email to our learning buddy my learning body was Liam.
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Dear Liam
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Tama,
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of your DLO. The gmail logo definitely makes it more eye catching.
Did you actually send this email to Liam or have you just posted it on your blog?
Last year we had to write emails to our whanau explaining what our week has been like. Do you do this?
Next time you could tell everyone how to write an email and the structure that is needed for it.
Thanks for sharing.
Zara @ Belfast School.
Hi Tama
ReplyDeleteI like the email you sent to Liam. This blog post reminds me of my friend named Liam. Maybe next time you could send a email do another person that you know.